I'm Done

She can't do it anymore... So she is just done.

I'm done
With your heart breaks

I told you
They were a mistake

But no
You refused to listen

And now
You're broken inside

I knew
This would happen

And yet
I still tried to help you

But again
You couldn't handle the truth

So now
I'm just done

Author's Note

This is how my friend is acting like right now.... It's getting old so I'm just done.

Reviews

[KatiePie]

This was simple and to the point, and yet still it has a wave of beauty going across it, I wish I could write like this! You emotions are portrayed vividly, and that's something that I don't come across on this. The way it ended was gorgeous, with that last stanza, you used it as a dagger and showed you really know how to use your pen. Beautiful job!
-Cathrine

[Cassandra D.]

Wow.
I have the guts to tell a friend that, but not in this way... lol.
I really liked it. In my point of view, you seemed to have expressed anger, or something. Really good.

[AbsentElements]

I wish I was brave enough to tell this to a few people in particular. Amazing that you can even put it in writing. Takes a lot of courage just to say the words. Very interesting.

[Chloe Christine]

This is soo understandable.
I loove it.
in my opinion, the VERY LAST line needs a few more syllables.
it would flow better if you put it as,

So now
I'm just done with you.

Maybe that's just the rhymer inside me,
but I like it.
anyways t's a verry good write (:

[Mauricio Montoya]

Short and to the point, nice work.

[Haifa]

Great write, simply I liked it :)

[SamBug]

Wow this was amazing. It was so simple yet held some powerful words that could shatter the earth with amazingness. I loved it

[deeps]

This is an amazing write here.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Hard to watch those around you struggle. Sometimes space is what you need.

[Daydreamer54]

I'm done
With your heart breaks

I told you
They were a mistake
i like how those lines rhyme! great break-up poem u have here!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

No matter how much you love your friends, the stress of their relationships
can put a strain on your own. Love the story of tough love. It is perfectly clear that you care. Otherwise it wouldnt bother you so much