Misery

She is stressing over all the little things in life. All she wants to do is make people happy.

I'm struggling
Unable to decide
What's right or wrong

I'm hiding
Afraid of rejection
Their words scare me

I'm dwelling
On the past
Friends never do last

I'm obsessing
Over every mistake
Only longing for success

I'm realizing
Trust is unknown
 But lies are unforgettable

I'm wondering
How much longer
Until my misery ends

Will it ever end...?

Author's Note

Just something I'm going through.

Reviews

[Brandon]

Strong piece, very well done.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

Here's a dose of your own advice . . . (cough* cough*) . . . hope it helps.
"I know what this feels like. To be hurt and to fight the tears... nobody understands... but everything will be ok. stay strong."

[Havatara]

Aww that's sad! I hope you don't go through that for very long. Keep writing!

[Scarlet Pulse]

this is a well written poem Manda. I really liked it, even though you are going through a hard time. I hope everything works out!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great free form poem. It happens to the best of us sometimes. Life can get overwhelming and almost unbearable at times. Try taking a deep breath and remember we can't predict peoples actions but we can choice our reaction. You will stand tall and make it through.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is a sad poem. I know how you feel though. It is a really hard question to ask when you are depressed and everything. This was a good write. I can relate to it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Bubo]

We all struggle with these emotions that you have put into emotional words..........and yes, i think at some point it ends to be replaced with other emotions.........very deep write.

[KatiePie]

I like how easy this is to relate to, it gives the poem a personal edge and leaves the reader wanting to know, feel and experience more. You write with so much emotion, when your pen meets your paper, I bet they bleed together, do they not?
Gorgeous write!
-Cathrine

[AbsentElements]

Another poem I can relate to. Let's just hope it does end for you, because I of all people can understand your pain. Nicely put.

[Chloe Christine]

I love this. something I can relate too.
Very nice, like always.