Depressed

She feels like this so very much....

I'm holding on

Hiding from my feelings

Hurting from the past

Fearful of what's ahead

I'm just simply...

Miserable

And It's because....

I'm depressed

Author's Note

It may not be my best but it's something I'm going through right now....

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

Life sometimes is hard to face, but once we go through them and face them boldly, later in life when we turn back looking at our hard times it will either make us laugh thinking we were silly to feel sad for that or it will give us more courage thinking "this prob is not tough than that i once faced", so come on don't give up your hope and self confidence, everyone is special on this earth in god's hands, so enjoy your life and keep smiling.... Have faith and trust in God , he will do the best for you,...

[EverEmma]

Wow, that was very moving. It hits home, great stuff. It took me a few times of reading it to decide whether or not it meant anything to me. Keep working.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem hits hard. I think you are a born lyricist.

[thatbryngirl]

powerful, short poem...its a good write!

[Chloe Christine]

I loved itt.
Short, sweet, too the point.
95/100.
Birlliant.

[charlotte talley]

everything is going to be alright. I know that things seems so unbareable but God will always make things better for us just hold on.

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

A powerful poem ^^ Rather short and to-the-point, however, that seemed to merely add to the impact; the simplicity was brilliant. I also like how you made particular words bold, it, too, added to the power. Although it may not be your best (in your opinion) it's still rather good. You're pretty talented :) Great write.

[KatiePie]

It's simple but still quite beautiful. It's got this flow of passion to it. I don't really know how to explain it so well but.. When I read it out loud it touched my soul. Its powerful, don't doubt your talent, when it's this good.
-Cathrine

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Short but powerful and straight to the point. I love this poem; pretty much reflects my feelings at the moment. I like how you made the most strongest words (in my opinion) bold;well done, this is another great poem :)

[Tina Kline]

Nicely done, it gets right to the point. Cleverly written.

[Poetic Beauty]

I hope in time this feeling passes but writing about it does help vent those negative emotions. the flow of this poem is good and the idea come across in this poem and that is great with it being a short piece.