Depressed

She feels like this so very much....

I'm holding on

Hiding from my feelings

Hurting from the past

Fearful of what's ahead

I'm just simply...

Miserable

And It's because....

I'm depressed

Author's Note

It may not be my best but it's something I'm going through right now....

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

Life sometimes is hard to face, but once we go through them and face them boldly, later in life when we turn back looking at our hard times it will either make us laugh thinking we were silly to feel sad for that or it will give us more courage thinking "this prob is not tough than that i once faced", so come on don't give up your hope and self confidence, everyone is special on this earth in god's hands, so enjoy your life and keep smiling.... Have faith and trust in God , he will do the best for you,...

[P.S I Love You]

Don't be it's not worth it. I know how your feeling... I've been through it many times.. Cheer up i'm sure things will look brighter.. This is a great poem short and sweet right to the point.

[Mauricio Montoya]

don't worry, the sun will shine again.
keep on writing. Take care Mauricio

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Depression is the worst sickness, I know how you feel

[MissWordSmith]

the sheer simplicity of this hit like a ton of bricks.
i'm surprised that i liked it, but i did. :)

[Haifa]

It is very short poem but it is very powerful poem. Well done

[LynLee]

i disagree it is good, short and to the point

[Just Charles]

It is short and racy, but packs a punch of emotional honesty. Personally, I enjoy poems like these, if they are written with honesty and proper detail. Yours accomplishes both.


- Charles

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

Oh man :(
This really hit hard, I'm sorry that you're feeling this way! I know this feeling all too well: The feeling you get when something from the past is bothering you. I just HATE IT! It'll all be okay in the end, though :)
Lovely (uhm... lets go with that word for now haha) write! You were able to move me with words, enough to worry about you. Hope everything's okay! :)
-Isi/kant

[PaperHearts]

Despite it's shortness and simplicity, there seemed to be a lot going on in this poem. Your emotions came across really strongly, and in a way which made it seem genuine, raw, and relatable. It can be hard sometimes to even put into words how you're feeling, so in that sense, I thought that you did an incredible job in sharing with us an experience that is clearly a difficult one for you at the moment. Stay strong Manda. :)
~PaperHearts

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

You have company..this is well expressed,your words are just right for expressing what one commonly goes through while suffering from depression.You do not waste words and it is expressed well.