Depressed

Depressed

A Poem by Manda
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She feels like this so very much....

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I'm holding on

Hiding from my feelings

Hurting from the past

Fearful of what's ahead

I'm just simply...

Miserable

And It's because....

I'm depressed

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
It may not be my best but it's something I'm going through right now....

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Life sometimes is hard to face, but once we go through them and face them boldly, later in life when we turn back looking at our hard times it will either make us laugh thinking we were silly to feel sad for that or it will give us more courage thinking "this prob is not tough than that i once faced", so come on don't give up your hope and self confidence, everyone is special on this earth in god's hands, so enjoy your life and keep smiling.... Have faith and trust in God , he will do the best for you,...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Its very deep. I hope you find the strength to carry on.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've been there time and time again. Getting it out on paper is the best therapy. The future always seems a bit scary but it always gets better even when you can't imagine that it will it always does. I like how you wrote some words in bold it really emphasizes your pain and uncertainty. Honest and raw.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's good.
Writing is always a good way to vent out frustrations and feelings. It's good

Posted 14 Years Ago


It doesnt have to necessarily be your best. Use your writing to vent. Hopefully it helps. Nice work though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very real

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short, but it describes a depression nicely. I have to say I'm in the same situation right now. So I can honestly say... Very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I feel what you are feeling in the poem. I have depression and it gets worse it seems everyday. I feel bad for the depressed. I feel bad when people who barely get depression. I am depressed at this point...for my own reasons...well thanks for sharing. :(

Posted 14 Years Ago


Life sometimes is hard to face, but once we go through them and face them boldly, later in life when we turn back looking at our hard times it will either make us laugh thinking we were silly to feel sad for that or it will give us more courage thinking "this prob is not tough than that i once faced", so come on don't give up your hope and self confidence, everyone is special on this earth in god's hands, so enjoy your life and keep smiling.... Have faith and trust in God , he will do the best for you,...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, I hope you get better, THis was a very short and too the point poem. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Depression is a terrible thing to go through. I hope you get better soon :)
Keep writing :]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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