I Want

I haven't felt this was in so long! But now my hormones are getting the best of me

It has been so long
Since I've felt this
Craving desire

       I want to taste
       His lips on mine

       I want to feel
       That shivering sensation
       As he enters inside me

       I want to look
       Into those beautiful eyes
       And see my reflection

       I want to lay
       Under the sheets
       With our bodies touching

       I want to hear
       His seducing voice
       In my ear

       But must of all
       I want this craving desire
       To never end

Author's Note

I thought about writing something, since its been a while since I've written anything.

Reviews

[Devons]

I couldn't agree with you more. Sex, like so many other -if not all- experiences in life never lasts long enough. The feeling is fuelled by desire and want and need, but then all those things are by necessity quenched by their own aims. It's rather like climbing a hill whilst out on a hike..you're filled with the anticipation of reaching the heights and surmounting the peak, all the time your emotions fired-up and oiled luxuriously by the motivation to reach your goal... But then, once you get there, admiring the view and enjoying the relief of achievement and gratification..you say to yourself "Well, that's a great view - now let's go" ...and on to the next... An ending, ultimate disappointment in the ephemeral nature of attainment... The only way to continue is to indulge in the idea of the next big thing... I've always thought that if you could harness those desires permanently, there would be no end to your happiness and motivation and to what you might achieve... However, those feelings rely on being sated in some way, otherwise they cannot exist...
This is a great poem. It flows really well, is concise, sexy, sensual, spiritual, and asks of existence a very profound question... but there is no real solution.

[A.Lee]

I like the way you highlighted each of the senses. Nice work.

[Scarlet Pulse]

I like this poem, and how you include your senses. It definitely heightens your readers senses as well. Very nice.

[charlotte talley]

I agree with tina kline this is erotic and romantic. you described the very essence of the nature of the body. good write.

[Tina Kline]

Erotic and romantic. You did a good job on capturing those two emotions in your write.

[Sara]

romantic, but also very hot, a good combination in my opinion... ;)

[SamBug]

Wow, this was crazy good! I loved it!

[deeps]

I think this is a amazing write

[KatiePie]

I love the imagery in this, you also show a lot of emotion. Great write!
-Cathrine

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought it was good. Nice emotion. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Senseless whatever]

Good write.