I Want

I haven't felt this was in so long! But now my hormones are getting the best of me

It has been so long
Since I've felt this
Craving desire

       I want to taste
       His lips on mine

       I want to feel
       That shivering sensation
       As he enters inside me

       I want to look
       Into those beautiful eyes
       And see my reflection

       I want to lay
       Under the sheets
       With our bodies touching

       I want to hear
       His seducing voice
       In my ear

       But must of all
       I want this craving desire
       To never end

Author's Note

I thought about writing something, since its been a while since I've written anything.

Reviews

[Devons]

I couldn't agree with you more. Sex, like so many other -if not all- experiences in life never lasts long enough. The feeling is fuelled by desire and want and need, but then all those things are by necessity quenched by their own aims. It's rather like climbing a hill whilst out on a hike..you're filled with the anticipation of reaching the heights and surmounting the peak, all the time your emotions fired-up and oiled luxuriously by the motivation to reach your goal... But then, once you get there, admiring the view and enjoying the relief of achievement and gratification..you say to yourself "Well, that's a great view - now let's go" ...and on to the next... An ending, ultimate disappointment in the ephemeral nature of attainment... The only way to continue is to indulge in the idea of the next big thing... I've always thought that if you could harness those desires permanently, there would be no end to your happiness and motivation and to what you might achieve... However, those feelings rely on being sated in some way, otherwise they cannot exist...
This is a great poem. It flows really well, is concise, sexy, sensual, spiritual, and asks of existence a very profound question... but there is no real solution.

[larryb]

Nice write but you should a made this mature...Tsk Tsk

[Cassandra D.]

very lovely.

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

Wow... I couldnt agree with you more! I loved this poem! What I hate about being a teenager, especially an intelligent one, is that you know better than to physically do those things so you have to succumb to writing about your frustration. I know the feeling, believe me! I dislike hormones. (Not w***e moans, HORMONES :D)
We are human: Our sexual desire and craving is never going to end.
Lovely write, this is another one of my favorites :)

[AbsentElements]

I can't say I've ever 'completely' had sex with someone but there have been related experiences and I can say that even though I have never experinced exactly what you have, I can honestly say I have known what its like to want it... Especially this badly. You didn't hold back at all in this poem, making sure to point out everything you want... That is what makes this piece perfect.

[PaperHearts]

I liked this. You've done really well in shaping your voice as a writer, and it seemed like so much had been put into this piece. I thought that the structure of this was really unique and effective, and that the emotions that you described were relatable and genuine. Keep writing! :)
~PaperHearts

[P.S I Love You]

I see alot of emotion in this poem. Sex in something we all want in life. Wonderful poem.

[Kimberly Smith]

wow, this was the essence of that lusting point that someone loning for you some what makes you feel better about yourself, every gurl thinks this way making sex more than sex but a confidence boost aswell lol

[An owl on the moon]

You voice such a powerful, sensual desire... one that moves you deeply in every way. Beautifully expressed with rich passion.