He mite not be my real dad but I will always love him as if he was. Hope this write means as much to you as it means to me. I wrote it in this way because I thought it was different, thats all! Heh
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Endearing with a thoughtful slant, framed in the caring of the pathways creation of those that create immortal life long impressions of gratitude.
The soul you've searched along this reflection, and in the sharing gain enduring rewards. As a true daughter. This rendering moves me to speak to deeper streams of regard, to those that are due honor in the making of lives complete. This piece reminds, that I seek that place and recalls family, love, honor and respect...
All those qualities that make living meaningful.
Tangible and Real.
To a spirit and of soul,
delivered.
Thank you for sharing such a precious refection, Manda.
Beautifully expressed from somewhere very real he must be a wonderful Dad. Bravo on this soulful poem.
Being a step dad can be a lot harder then being a biological dad. It seems from your write he has done a heck of a job. This is very emotional and heart felt. I can definitely see your love for him in this. Hope he loves it as much as I do. Great job writing from the heart.
Great write! It was so heartfelt and emotionally driven, and it made me smile to see that you really appreciate your step-dad, because there are so many people who really don't. I didn't really understand the way you formatted this, with the sloping stanzas, but other than that, I thought it was a lovely write! :)
~PaperHearts
I was a step dad so I know. And I always treated my step kids like I treated my own son. I miss them and hurt to see them go, but they will always be in my heart.
This poem is just beautiful. As a proponent and creator of the Court ordered Vasectomy...I love it. Now if you will excuse me, THERE'S SOMETHING IN MY EYE!!!
Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in.. more..