No More

I dont need him anymore... I'm done

Just shut up!
I don't want to hear it!

You're not sorry,
And you don't care!

You already told me to leave,
And never come back!

I did what you said,
Instead of taking your head!

So just shut up!
And stop your whining!

I don't need this,
And I don't need you!

So shut up!
And leave me alone!

Author's Note

I don't need this pain anymore. I don't need to be sad... Its been a while since I've wrote anything, but finally I managed to write something. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[zappy]

i like its very good

[Devons]

Like the finality of your anger! This would make a great send-off for a jilting lover!

[A.Lee]

You really got your emotions across in this piece, and thats the point. Well done.

[Senseless whatever]

Angry and to the point. Good job, let it go.

[Jess.]

Angry poems are my favorite, next to sad ones, because I love to feel the emotions, as I did in this piece.
It seems like a sad time when you have to move on from someone, but it gets so much better with time.
I can relate to this, nicely done :)

[Sofia N]

Very Powerful. And I agree with you and sometimes in life we must walk away from the things that causes us pain and sorrow. We shouldn't be caught up in so much drama and stress and plus love shouldn't cause us pain, because if it hurts too much than there''s definitely something wrong with it. I love the emotions and the flow of this write. Good job huns :)

[Luna Northstar]

I really like this piece. Its short, but very powerful and emotional. I've felt like this before, so i get where your coming from. Nice job!

[deeps]

Wow! This is amazing
I like it shows power.

[Rodrick Franklin McLare..]

Short review but marked well.
Never suffer fools gladly, take what's delivered. When it's crap. Walk away...
Never look back. Leave them to their misery as they attempt to make you carry it.
To feel spiteful. Baggage released, writing it out moving on to sunnier days, and.
Smiling ;)

[PaperHearts]

Wow, the anger and frustration was spot on in this piece! The directness of your writing style is definitely something that makes your writing unique to you, and I thought that this poem epitomised that perfectly. Nice work,
~PaperHearts