Best Friends

We were best friends, but soon became lovers

I miss you
Because I can't see you

I love you
Because I can't have you

You were my best friend
But now....

You're the love of my life

Author's Note

This is just something I am going through right now. And its really hard to explain but it is really happening.

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Lovely, simple, perfect like the feelings it expresses.

[JenLyn]

This is really good, keep it up! :) 100/100

[deeps]

Aw this is so heartfelt!
I throughly enjoyed this write here.
This is amazing and sweet.
Well done Manda!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem. Totally heartfelt. Most of us can relate.
I love the simplicity. It really sticks.

[larryb]

Well all i can say is nicely done and i hope and wish much happiness for you as you taste all of what life has to offer us ...

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I know exactly what you're talking about, sweetie. Same thing happened to me. :P
Love the simplicity of this poem.

[ClosingAccount]

Sweet

[*Kantola*]

Short, sweet, and to the point. I LOVED IT!!! :)
Wow... i know exactly what you mean.
LOVED THIS PIECE!!!
WRITE ON, SISTAH!!! :)

[Emily]

Beautiful in its simplicity. Well phrased, well written, and well structured. Very nice piece. It is hard to switch from best friend to love, but it is possible. Good luck!

[Michael X]

this reads like a sad dream, to love and to suffer at the same time, you capture the feeling as an agonizing pultritude that is poeitcally vivid and captivating in ways it causes the reader to relate, you did an
awsome job, bittersweet and essensified.