Good Girl Gone Bad

She cheated. She cant love. There is not one good bone in her body.

Don't let her long blonde hair, and dark green eyes fool you.
Beyond her beauty lies a monster.
She stirs the night waiting for her next victim.
Her eyes hypnotize you.
Her kisses put you under a lust spell.
One so strong, there is no way to escape.
She torments you and makes you give her, her every desire.
She loves to tie you up and watch you scream in pain.
You can't trust her, nor can you love her.
So don't let her beauty fool you.
For she is another good girl gone bad.

Author's Note

This is kind of different. I dont know what you will think, so give me your opinions please!

Reviews

[charlotte talley]

to me this describes a person that is not very human. I like it becasue you put it to the test of a humanl in desguise. she is not very bright, but only to fool you into her. good one.

[AbsentElements]

It's always interesting when someone can turn something that is somewhat of a sort into a poem this way. It tells things in a different way. Very nice.

[Dressed in Poetry]

I like this one, actually. I think you should do more writes like this sometimes. Different can be wonderful; at the very least, it's a nice change. :]

[A.Lee]

This is really good. Well written. The only thing I would possibly change is "Her kisses put you under a lust spell." I would change "lust" to "lustful". Other than that I liked this poem. Nice job.

[zappy]

very cool poem i like it

[X]

this reminds me of my old writing style. i can't say that i didn't enjoy it however.

[r]

interesting... i really don't know what to say other than its interesting!

[Senseless whatever]

Very Cool write. i think I know her btw. lol

[Sofia N]

This is awesome, I love your description of the concept in this one, Very powerful and I love your choice of words. Keep it up ;)

[Bear]

Good Girl GONE BAD!! WOAH... I was expecting fangs to be sunk into the neck of spellbound victim... and yet, I'm smiling knowing that the blonde, green eyed, vixen's origin remained a human form. Vicious perhaps... but then, he could have fought for his freedom or perhaps he just didn't have to strength within to ward off the spell of her green hypnotic eyes? ;~) What fun to read!! Brava!!