Good Girl Gone Bad

She cheated. She cant love. There is not one good bone in her body.

Don't let her long blonde hair, and dark green eyes fool you.
Beyond her beauty lies a monster.
She stirs the night waiting for her next victim.
Her eyes hypnotize you.
Her kisses put you under a lust spell.
One so strong, there is no way to escape.
She torments you and makes you give her, her every desire.
She loves to tie you up and watch you scream in pain.
You can't trust her, nor can you love her.
So don't let her beauty fool you.
For she is another good girl gone bad.

Author's Note

This is kind of different. I dont know what you will think, so give me your opinions please!

Reviews

[daninstockholm]

I like!! well written with some good ideas and images,, cool!!

[Wolfe Greytome]

Different works well for you - this is an excellent piece.

[TadKent]

Wow. Very cool, and sexy. Cautionary tale about the seductress in the corner of the room.

[rachielle]

Nice poem. It's a different aspect of the phrase "good girl gone bad". I liked the way you really described her attributes so that your readers could actually picture this specific girl. Good job!

[Havatara]

I liked it. Maybe you can change "lust" to "lustful" and take out the comma between "her her." But it's your poem, and it's great the way it is. Write more like it! =)

[Luna Northstar]

Very sad. Beautiful, but sad. It is a very true poem, like liked this a lot, great job. :)

[Haifa]

So true, I agree. It is good poem, well done.

[Jasmarine]

True. This is good, considering MOST guys go for looks but don't know what they're getting themselves into until it's too late. I like how you portrayed the narrator, like another girl trying to warn a guy they have a crush on from making the wrong decision. Good work :)

[PaperHearts]

I liked this! It's definitely different from what you usually write, but the way you wrote this created a character, and a tone to it, which made it unique and captivating to read. Great work,
~PaperHearts

[Pax Analog]

This poem reads enjoyably like movie promo copy -- Succubusty -- 'bout some winsome cheerleader turned devil sex spawn. ;-)

Lurid always has a splashy ring of truth. Cool.