On The Run

She runs all over the guys. Shes a w***e reading to hit the spot! Better watch yourself!

Oh God
That B***h
Is On The Run
Again

She's Hot
And Loves
To Hit
The Spot

You Better
Call The Cops
Before It's Too Late
And You Take The Bait

Her Long Blonde Hair
And Big Green Eyes
Will Make You Want To Die
Because She Is So Damn Fine

Oh God
Here That B***h Comes
So You Better Run
For You're Her Next One

Author's Note

I don't know... something different I guess.

Reviews

[kbjami]

I'm guessing it's about how maybe some guys get distracted by beauty and not actually notice how awful the person is. Like it says how "you better run" for maybe I think it's saying run from her deceitful ways. This really reminds me of this quote "There are two kinds of light - the glow that illumines, and the glare that obscures" (James Thurber).

[Frantzuu]

I really like this, great job :D

[Emily]

Very interesting. I like your writing in a 'different' mindset. You are talented and able to write of different things.
I like this peice. I know the feeling that people are, more especially women, are out to get your guy friends. It is hilarious to watch, but at the same time it can be rather dangerous.
I like the flow of this, and the word choice.
Very nice work.

[Sofia N]

I love it...Really good job..Keep it up :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

wow..this really got me going. Nice poem.

[Bear]

hahaha.... fun to read.... good advice about some... I've got a smile upon my mug thanx to your write.

Sallie Bear

[JenLyn]

I loved it! Kudos to you! :D 100/100

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

i love it! it's kind of what's happening to my love now...anyway good poem, awsome!

[Sseoni]

Interesting poem! It was definitely something different, but different is always good! It lets you explore new things! While reading it, I felt a sense of danger and I felt like the girl was some sort of a predator. I really liked the last line of the poem. It really makes you think that she's coming for you. Nice poem! :D