I'm guessing it's about how maybe some guys get distracted by beauty and not actually notice how awful the person is. Like it says how "you better run" for maybe I think it's saying run from her deceitful ways. This really reminds me of this quote "There are two kinds of light - the glow that illumines, and the glare that obscures" (James Thurber).
Intense. Haha, I liked the short and sharpness of this poem, and the way it kind of read like lyrics to a song. It is certainly different from what you usually write, but it's good to change it up sometimes. :) Nice write,
~PaperHearts
Interesting twist Manda. This poem differs from many of your other ones. This poem isn't written in first person, so it's interesting to see. I think its very good and entertaining to an extent. Try to come up with a different maybe more captivating third stanza. I like it but not so much these lines:
Before It's Too Late
And You Take The Bait
I liked it overall.
alright, this is nice, but could be better. the flow was okay, but very erratic. sometimes erratic is good in a poem, but it didn't work so well here. the words were nice, and the idea was great, but i think you can put it down in a better way.
Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in.. more..