Love And Lust
A Poem by
Manda
They are so in love. Loving and lusting with one another in the sheets. Forever
Me and you Laying in bed Our bodies Naked and touching There's a burning sensation Of love and lust As we play In the sheets
© 2010 Manda
Author's Note
Just something... Feelings of love and lust makes me go crazy
Reviews
Wow. Made me wonder which is which. Nice job putting the brain and the imagination to work!
Posted 14 Years Ago
my oh my
Posted 14 Years Ago
my oh my
as we play in the sheets... what a beautiful line!
Posted 14 Years Ago
as we play in the sheets... what a beautiful line!
Lovely...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Lovely...
love and lust mixed together in right proportion ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
love and lust mixed together in right proportion ...
Desire, to be led by it period lol. Nice write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Desire, to be led by it period lol. Nice write.
Oh to be 20 something again and led by desire
Posted 14 Years Ago
Oh to be 20 something again and led by desire
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
love it!!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
love it!!!!!
I so love this..it makes me think that love and lust seem to go together ..but greatt job on this one..short but I love it, i love the flow and the description..veryy good :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I so love this..it makes me think that love and lust seem to go together ..but greatt job on this one..short but I love it, i love the flow and the description..veryy good :)
Love this piece, so much is said here, and the imagery in this small write is bigger then the words themselves. very powerful :D
Posted 14 Years Ago
Love this piece, so much is said here, and the imagery in this small write is bigger then the words themselves. very powerful :D
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Added on April 18, 2010
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Manda OH
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Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in..
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