Love And Lust
A Poem by
Manda
They are so in love. Loving and lusting with one another in the sheets. Forever
Me and you Laying in bed Our bodies Naked and touching There's a burning sensation Of love and lust As we play In the sheets
© 2010 Manda
Author's Note
Just something... Feelings of love and lust makes me go crazy
Reviews
simply stated.
Posted 14 Years Ago
short, and sexy sweet.... all is said in such short lines..
Posted 14 Years Ago
short, and sexy sweet.... all is said in such short lines..
i really like this write
Posted 14 Years Ago
i really like this write
I liked it. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I liked it. Thanks for sharing. :)
Short and to the point. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Short and to the point. :)
Good rhythm, short and satisfying. I like it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Good rhythm, short and satisfying. I like it.
This is simply said but you get you point across loud and clear. I love the last two lines.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is simply said but you get you point across loud and clear. I love the last two lines.
I get the point :)..........good 1
Posted 14 Years Ago
I get the point :)..........good 1
nice rhythm! Fun to read!
Posted 14 Years Ago
nice rhythm! Fun to read!
Nice. Powerful without being rated R. Well done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice. Powerful without being rated R. Well done.
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Added on April 18, 2010
Last Updated on April 18, 2010
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Manda OH
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Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in..
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