Love And Lust

Love And Lust

A Poem by Manda
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They are so in love. Loving and lusting with one another in the sheets. Forever

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Me and you

Laying in bed

Our bodies

Naked and touching

There's a burning sensation

Of love and lust

As we play

In the sheets


© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
Just something... Feelings of love and lust makes me go crazy

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simply stated.

Posted 14 Years Ago


short, and sexy sweet.... all is said in such short lines..

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like this write

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short and to the point. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good rhythm, short and satisfying. I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is simply said but you get you point across loud and clear. I love the last two lines.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I get the point :)..........good 1

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice rhythm! Fun to read!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice. Powerful without being rated R. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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