Love And Lust

They are so in love. Loving and lusting with one another in the sheets. Forever

Me and you

Laying in bed

Our bodies

Naked and touching

There's a burning sensation

Of love and lust

As we play

In the sheets

Author's Note

Just something... Feelings of love and lust makes me go crazy

Reviews

[Stephanie Slayer]

wonderful piece

[Chloe Christine]

recently, I've come in contact with things like this.
It's really pretty, and it rolls off your tounge.

[SarahCortland]

short sweet and to the point i like it it tells the feeling without being to detailed and it gets the point across easily good job!

[CherryBomb]

simple&nice

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This is good, I wish you had elaborated some..as it has the potiental to be even better..nice though.

[PaperHearts]

Hmm, not bad, not bad. I kind of wish you had dug deeper into the emotional side of such a situation, but I did like the directness of your poem. The short and sharp lines worked really effectively, particularly near the beginning. Not quite there yet, but a great start nonetheless. :)
~PaperHearts

[Jibey]

I like the simplicity of this... a simple as two people naked together and thrilled by the feeling of bare flesh and soft touch and beating hearts and sheer arousal...

[SamBug]

Interesting. Such a small poem but straight to the point. Very cute.

[Mitch*Dandy]

Aws! I love this! Very sweet and romantic! Hehe >_< Thank you very much for sharing this poem! =) -Rachel

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like this piece. It is short and to the point - nothing unnecessary in evidence.