Can't Cry

She just can't cry. Only dying will end this stupid pain inside.

I want to cry
Instead of die

I'm sick of hiding
Behind all these lies

I can't buy
My happiness

Nor can I buy the tears
I dread to cry

I continue to lie
And hide

Because inside
It hurts to cry

I just want to die
For I just can't cry

Dying will end
This pain of mine

Then I wouldn't have to hide
Or even lie

I could just die
And not ever cry

I just wish I could cry
Instead of die....

Author's Note

Something I'm going through

Reviews

[Doreen]

In the words of my father, "This, too, shall pass." I can feel your pain in your words. I can also relate. The thing to remember is: life doesn't do it TO us. In each of us is the power to change the world. Don't ever lose who you are.
As for the poem, it is heartfelt with raw emotion. I can hear the girl who is unsure of how she really feels. Do I, or don't I? Nice write.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a deep emotional poem. the flow is easy to follow. I truly hope that life starts treating you kinder.

[James Watts]

I know these feelings all too well. Too, too, well. Nice write.

[Tate Morgan]

But I shall say I hope you recover

[Tate Morgan]

depressing to no end and such a waste of a good life and girl

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Very honest poem. Hopefully you will find the happiness you want very soon.

[Bear]

KEEP writing; working thru your emotions!! Hopefully soon the tears will begin to flow as your words flow out of you and when the tears finally start to flow perhaps then you'll see a way to heal and continue on; all the stronger for what you've been through.