My Fault

She knows its her fault but wishes that he would simply understand

Its all my fault
That we lost our friendship
And our love

I wish you understood
How much this guy means to me
And how much I love him

I know it's hard for you
To live your life
Knowing that you love me

But Jake
The fire we once had for one another
Burned out

It's time to move on
And get past the memories
And the love we once shared together

I wish we could still be friends
And be able to talk
But I guess that won't ever happen.

I wish it wasn't my fault
Our friendship died
And we forced to say goodbye
......

Author's Note

Something that is happening to me right now

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Well thats interesting .But one usually finds they cant be just friends

[Daniel Gardner]

Sad, but it comes across nicely. Well done.

[Kristen]

So sad but you conveyed it beautifully. Once again, nice job!

- S.T.

[Katie L]

love it well written, and if you need to talk i am ready to listen.

[Star Wolf]

Very sad and very painful.

[Haifa]

Really sad. I know how hard it is....
Anyway, great poem and keep writing.

[LynLee]

im reading it a second time............... i can feel the emotion and i gotta say......... i hate it when guys do this cuz it makes us girls feel weird!!!! espiaccly when you like see them somewhere.......... i hope everything works out!!

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This really got to me.
Keep writing what you feel girl!
Get it out of your system!

-Elissa :D

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

what a sad poem. This was a real tear jerker.

[JenLyn]

This poem is good but I like that other version better. Keep writing! :)