I dont know. I was just bored and everyone wanted something new so I guess this will have to do. Hope you like it! It mite need some work so tell me what you think
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It's dark and mysterious which I like a lot, cause I am dark and mysterious. But what really made me like this poem was the last two lines, "He aims his gun at me
And bang! I'm dead..." Keep writing!
When writing poetry, especially trying to make it different and new, it usually doesn't turn out the way you want it but most of the time it is just fine. This is one of those times. A very interesting write.
ok. this one made no sense to me! is it just me?!
was it supposed to be metaphoric?
and there were too many me me meees and they who died died died....
it was not thought out very well. sorry.
its dark and brings out excitement and danger. it really pulls the reader in and gets them wondering what will happen at the end. this is a great write.
This is definitely new and far from love related :)
I liked it!!!
Very suspenseful, and very descriptive. I kept wondering what was going to happen. "reading, reading, reading, BANG!"
Great job, Manda! :D
I've had a couple of dreams like this... but a scientific theory is, the night you die in your sleep is when you die in real life. I always wake up before I die though. Could be true! :)
VERY NICE topic, for a change!
Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in.. more..