Together Forever

A Poem by Manda

They will always be together

Together forever
Like we always say
And no matter what happens
Nothing will ever change
Because together
We are one
And forever
That will stay

© 2010 Manda

Author's Note

Just something that popped into my head. Hope you like it.

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Silere

I think the meaning of this poem is great. Most of the words flow very well. The last sentence feels a little awkward but overall a very good poem. I usually don't like it when people change their words but if you do, please let me know as I'd like to read it again. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Silere

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MissWordSmith

very sweet! a very certain, steadying feel to this. maybe expand the last three lines a bit... about how being one makes a forever...
just an idea. :) a v.good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in.. more..