Together Forever

Together Forever

A Poem by Manda
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They will always be together

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Together forever
Like we always say
And no matter what happens
Nothing will ever change
Because together
We are one
And forever
That will stay

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
Just something that popped into my head. Hope you like it.

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I think the meaning of this poem is great. Most of the words flow very well. The last sentence feels a little awkward but overall a very good poem. I usually don't like it when people change their words but if you do, please let me know as I'd like to read it again. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The rhyming just pulls it all together! What a great poem. If would even be a lot better if you expanded it, extended it.
GREAT READ!
~Smiley :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sweet poem. Great job!:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is simple, nice and promising.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i liked it....... it reminds me of my friends

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful and ever so lovely.
I like this. Wonderful poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


short and lovely poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The flow of this poem is great and it is wonderfully done for a short piece. I wish love could always be like this. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this becase it's so true and it sort of lays out what love and a commitment truly is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this piece because this is what I believe; a relation is a life time commitment together as one, forever. Nice work well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was touching just from the little poem. It didn't say much but it didn't have to because you worded it so well and made it say everything it need to in this one stanza. You did a really good job with this. :):) It flowed extermely well and it was sweet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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