Together Forever

Together Forever

A Poem by Manda
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They will always be together

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Together forever
Like we always say
And no matter what happens
Nothing will ever change
Because together
We are one
And forever
That will stay

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
Just something that popped into my head. Hope you like it.

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I think the meaning of this poem is great. Most of the words flow very well. The last sentence feels a little awkward but overall a very good poem. I usually don't like it when people change their words but if you do, please let me know as I'd like to read it again. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Hopeful and beautiful poetry for love dear Manda. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


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It's short and sweet and to the point. I love it, and the way you put the lines is awesome. ^^ :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like short little pieces like this that just kinda happen.

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww this is beautifully expressed. that's the way true love suppose to be. wonderful ink :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked it. The only thing I would change is the last 2 lines. I would have it "and together forever, is what we will stay" instead of "and forever, that will stay." But you're the poet and it's your decision.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I did. I'm not going to be able to give a decent review. I'm so uninspired right now.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short, sweet and to the point. Nicely done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute! You do simplistic really well, and this was certainly a reflection of that! I liked the rhythm of this piece, and the way the lines just seemed to ebb and flow leading up to the last line. This was really sweet. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short and sweet. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


it kinda rhymes too

Posted 14 Years Ago



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