Together Forever

They will always be together

Together forever
Like we always say
And no matter what happens
Nothing will ever change
Because together
We are one
And forever
That will stay

Author's Note

Just something that popped into my head. Hope you like it.

Reviews

[Silere]

I think the meaning of this poem is great. Most of the words flow very well. The last sentence feels a little awkward but overall a very good poem. I usually don't like it when people change their words but if you do, please let me know as I'd like to read it again. Thank you for sharing!

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

Awe. This is sooo cute.
I really like how straight forward it is.
Great write!

-Elissa :D

[JenLyn]

Short, sweet and to the point. I like this a lot the only thing that I don't like is the last two lines. "And forever that will stay," in my opinion I think it would sound better as "and forever we will stay," but that's just me. Overall a nice write. Keep it up! :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. It made my day so far.

[AbsentElements]

It is short but full of meaning. I really did thoroughly enjoy this poem.

[Frantzuu]

Love the picture u used for this piece, great work :D

[Tina Kline]

I like it. A little piece about true love, very nice.

[rockinmiley555]

this is short, strait to the point, sad (personal reasons), happy, and all around cute :} haha it really explains that if you love eachother enough, there is just something inside of you that KNOW that its forever

[Star Wolf]

Very nice thoughts put into a very very nice poem.

[Chloe Christine]

So cute! The meaning, and I can just imagine two people like this! Paints the best and most vivid picture in my head (:

[Holly-Marie]

Lovely. So sweet, simple and well written.
THe poem read wonderfully and flowed very well.