Never

She never wants to say goodbye. She never wants to see him go. She never knew what felt like to love anyone until now... Theres so much she doesnt know...

I don't know what to do
I have never wanted
Something so damn bad before

I never thought it was possible
To love a man
So f*****g much

I never knew how hard
It would be
To be without you
Or anyone for that matter

There's just so much
I never really knew
Until now

Ever since I met you
I just haven't
Been me

I never knew
The feeling of love
Until you came along

And now that I have learned
What it is to love someone
I dont want to let them go

I never
Want you
To go

I never
Want to
Say goodbye

I would rather die
Then to see you
One last time
Just because you had to
Say goodbye

I could never live
A life of happiness
If you don't live it with me

I would live a world
Full of black and white
And nothing more

I just don't know what to do
And I wouldn't know what to do
If I didn't have you

Author's Note

I dont care about grammar and flow... I just need to vent some more. But what I need most is my man. The one I love most. But how can I when he isnt here, hes there. In another state. I cant help but want him! I love him! And he loves me! I hope you like it but if you dont I'm sorry...

Reviews

[smiley:)]

Great write, but, it could've been better without the language.

~Smiley :)

[Silere]

Sometimes flow is important.. but other times.. it's good to just write from your heart. I prefer the latter.. you seem to have so much emotion within your words.. so much passion for this guy. Keep that feeling.. for it's an amazing feeling even though sometimes it feels like pain. It's much better to have this feeling than to feel nothing at all.. embrace it!! Keep writing and stay true to yourself..Thank you for sharing!!

[Frantzuu]

Amazing write, I liked the way it's written.

[Star Wolf]

This feels emotionally painful. But love can be that.

[Tina Kline]

that desperate feeling of wanting to be with someone when you can't. The pain of their absence seems like hell. But we can't help falling in love and sometimes love can be hell and then it can take you straight to heaven!

[r]

i feel the same way about someone. it is something that anyone whos been madly in love can understand. Its heartfelt, its heartwarming, and well beautiful. Good job

[SamBug]

good job.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Do I detect some frustration in this writing; I can feel the strong emotions here, Your deliver is right to the point.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well that was some raw and powerful emotions displayed, no doubting your feelings here.

[deeps]

Very honest and powerful emotion.
I enjoyed this write. It's wonderful.