Never

She never wants to say goodbye. She never wants to see him go. She never knew what felt like to love anyone until now... Theres so much she doesnt know...

I don't know what to do
I have never wanted
Something so damn bad before

I never thought it was possible
To love a man
So f*****g much

I never knew how hard
It would be
To be without you
Or anyone for that matter

There's just so much
I never really knew
Until now

Ever since I met you
I just haven't
Been me

I never knew
The feeling of love
Until you came along

And now that I have learned
What it is to love someone
I dont want to let them go

I never
Want you
To go

I never
Want to
Say goodbye

I would rather die
Then to see you
One last time
Just because you had to
Say goodbye

I could never live
A life of happiness
If you don't live it with me

I would live a world
Full of black and white
And nothing more

I just don't know what to do
And I wouldn't know what to do
If I didn't have you

Author's Note

I dont care about grammar and flow... I just need to vent some more. But what I need most is my man. The one I love most. But how can I when he isnt here, hes there. In another state. I cant help but want him! I love him! And he loves me! I hope you like it but if you dont I'm sorry...

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

Pretty decent piece, though i didn't feel that is was up to your usual standard.

[AbsentElements]

I know how you feel loving someone so far away but there is so much more behind it...Anyway this is a very great poem and the repitition of the word never makes the it powerful.

[Havatara]

Missed an apostrophe in stanza 7. Other than that, it was an amazing, strong piece and I loved it.

[Brandon]

Strong piece. Nice job

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

I loooooove this! I love how when you vent, you create wonderful poetry, keep wwriting!

[Scarlet Pulse]

I do like it. It made me sad that you're away from the man you love. I know I wouldn't be able to do it. Keep strong and know you will be together soon. Good write.

[PaperHearts]

Your venting certainly paid off! This was a really high energy, intense piece, exuding raw, pain-filled emotions. You do a great job in finding the natural place for line breaks, making all of your work nice, effortless reads. In a way, I'd kind of like to see you step out of your comfort zone when it comes to writing poetry, but for a venting session, this was pretty good. Also, you shouldn't 'apologise' if people don't like your writing...You can't please everyone. :P
~PaperHearts

[Luna Northstar]

Venting is how you get some of your best pieces, nice.

[LynLee]

aaaaahhhhhhhhhh dont die on us!!! i loved this piece...... i wish it would go in a book already............ then again, isnt that what we all want.......

[A.Lee]

Wow, I can feel the intensity of love and pain seeping through the page. This is a very good poem. Keep writing. Its the best and safest outlet for those feelings, and you get great poems and stories from it as well.