Love Waits For You

She is so in love. She doesnt even know what to do with herself when she is gone. Life is just full of things about him!

I wait for you
Each and every
Lonely night
Waiting for you
To return

I cant bare
To be apart
Any longer

I cannot hold back
For my love for you
Is much too strong

My world
Surrounded by you
Our beautiful memories
And our long lasting love
For one another

I cant even
Begin to describe
How much
You mean to me

Each and every night
I miss you
And long for you
To come home

Its just been
To damn long
And I cannot bare it
Any longer

I am sick of waiting
And crying
Myself to sleep

Sick of not
Being able to live
Life to its fullest
Because I cannot get you
Off my mind

How can I ever
Try to love
Another man
When your my world

Ever since
We said our
Last goodbyes
I've cried

You were
My love
And the one
I longed for

The one I wished
To be with
Forever
And ever

You were
My first
And now
My last

I never
Had given
My heart up
Until now

I cannot let go
For you are
My heaven on Earth
And the Love
Of my life

This is why
I shall wait
Till the ends of the Earth
For you

You are
The world I live in
The air I breath
And the man I love

And so I shall keep waiting
Each and every
Lonely night
Until you to return home

Author's Note

Ok so I wrote this after I had watched "Shakespeare in Love." I became crazy and realized finally who I wanted most. Who I wanted to love! I dont know if this makes sense, honestly I dont, but thats ok. I do hope you enjoy this and if not I am sorry. Please feel free to give me any advice! I would be happy to make this better! Thanks!

Reviews

[Katannaism]

This hardly needs any redo. Except when you say you can't 'bare' it, it should have been 'bear'. Bare is to like, strip down or something. You know?
But this is beautifully wonderful poem nonetheless. Great piece!

[HorrorMaster]

Very nice poem

[Havatara]

I thought it was great. You didn't put very many apostrophes in your contractions, and you put your instead of you're, but other than that I loved it.

[Scarlet Pulse]

This was a great poem. It has a really nice rhythm to it. I really enjoyed reading it. You are really good at expressing your feelings through words, which is a great aspect of your poems. Good job.

[LynLee]

woowwww........ i felt like crying...... and its hard to make me cry......... it sounds like hes in the military or something...........sorry if he is tho......... i love how you compared everything and i just loved it! 100/100!!!!! tryed 1000/100,but it wont let me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[PaperHearts]

Aww, what a lovely poem! I could tell that you really poured your heart and soul into this, and I appreciate that a lot. It's funny how inspiration can come to you in the most unexpected ways. =P Great write,
~PaperHearts

[Star Wolf]

Love is powerful!

[Cassandra D.]

this was very beautiful

[Poetic Beauty]

These feels are very strong and seem pretty recent to me. I do hope that you don't feel like this much longer for I know your pain. I have had this feeling for almost three years now. I have tried moving on and other things but nothing has changed so from a person who knows this all too well I hope you don't feel like this forever.

[r]

nice write i need to see your background for this to see how it lines up! nice job though