Just when I think I have found everything, God has to go and change things. I dont know what I want or even what I need. All I know is that I'm confused and supposedly falling in love
Oh God please Dont do this to me
Just when I think I have found the one
You have to go and Change things around
I thought I knew What exactly I wanted
What I needed And loved most
But now... Its all just a blur
Oh God please Dont do this
I beg of you Please dont
I cant have you Playing with my heart
I am not capable Of loving everyone
I especially cant be falling in love With my very best friend
I have to vent. I have to write this out. I just dont know what to do! I cant be feeling this way! Especially with HIM! Oh dear lord! Well I hope you like this piece! And if you dont I am so sorry. I dont feel like this is one of my best pieces but I just needed to let it out... I dont know about the ending. It seems ok for now but I want to know what you think bout it. If you dont like it then dont rate! Please...! Just give your advice or comments! I am trying to raise my status! Thanks =)
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Well it's always good to let ur feelings out on paper i always say. Some things in life just happen right and at times we can't control how we feel. Especially when it comes to infatuation. I don;t get the last line, but it;s still good. :)
The way this is written, your paper practically bleeds with emotions, I loved reading this whole thing and obviously your writing from the heart, the soul and that makes this all the more gorgeous. Your talent and feelings mixed together make the words jump off the page. Beautifully done.
-Cathrine
The strong compusvive feelings on young childhood, the lack of understanding of love, and almost primitive innocence, a nice piece honest and flowing x
Vents and bursts of passion are always good poems. The emotion flows through them like an electric charge and it the reader feels it instantly. Thats what you've done here. As one who tends to write in the heat of emotion (be it good or bad), I can relate. Very good poem.
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