Live, Laugh, Love

We live, laugh, and always love! Hes everything to me!

Together
We live for each other
 
Together
We laugh at one another

But together
We love forever

Author's Note

Just another short poem. I guess its like others but I feel like its different. I needed to vent some more. I kinda like the shortness of poems. I feel like it gives it a stronger meaning to things. I thought about saying, Together we live, laugh and love but I thought it would ruin it. What do you think? Anyways hope you like it! Rate and give advice! Trying to still raise my status! Thanks =)

Reviews

[rachielle]

Very creative. I liked the shortness of them poem, and how it expounds to be so much more than just six lines. Good work!:D

[Mauricio Montoya]

cool

[Frantzuu]

This is beautiful, great job.

[SamBug]

This was so beautiful and touching. I absolutely loved this! Such short words and such a short word but put all together, it means just about everything. Well done!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

What beautiful poem, I really like this :) I like the simplicity, sweetness and shortness of this. You are right; short poems do give a stronger meaning to 'things', and this one certainly does... Well done!

[Tina Kline]

What a wonderful love poem. It says it all in such few words. Very skillfully done.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a joy and freedom expressed in the beauty of your love for one another. This is a bright, hopeful work that lifts the reader!

[QuietPoet]

This is a nice little write. Im glad I stopped by to read.

[The Wave]

I love the phrase "live laugh love", but I don't think your poem gave the phrase any justice. It lacks STRENGTH and originality.

I do like how you formatted this piece and see potential in it. I know what you tried to do, using few words to convey a deeper meaning, but I think you needed more. Either more words or better descriptive words.
Overall, there is potential here,
Good job

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great statement for live and could be used in many different situations. Good short write.