Live, Laugh, Love

We live, laugh, and always love! Hes everything to me!

Together
We live for each other
 
Together
We laugh at one another

But together
We love forever

Author's Note

Just another short poem. I guess its like others but I feel like its different. I needed to vent some more. I kinda like the shortness of poems. I feel like it gives it a stronger meaning to things. I thought about saying, Together we live, laugh and love but I thought it would ruin it. What do you think? Anyways hope you like it! Rate and give advice! Trying to still raise my status! Thanks =)

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

I love short poems as well....and this one is no exception. Well done as always!!!

[JenLyn]

Short, sweet and to the point. Very good write, keep it up! :)

[Sunny]

i like that it's short because anymore words would have made the meaning less powerful =]

[Scarlet Pulse]

I really like it, it's very sweet. Instead of laugh at each other maybe (with) each other?? Up to you but I like this.

[holly jones]

aw, that's beautiful! i love how you have written something so short and packed so much imagery into it

[alison13]

short but quite amazing. keep it up. :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Short words make the greatest poems1 I loved it, it was wonderful and I fully enjoyed this piece of work. Thanks for sharing it!

[Tate Morgan]

You are learning distill the thoughts to their smallest nevus then you have the truth

[~lost and in my fantisi..]

i like this!!! its happy and nice!! =D

[LeeLee Ryder]

KEWL! The 3 L's are the best way to breathe...
A compact & direct write. You nutted it with no frills.
LLR