Everyday

I dont know what it is but I am crazy for him! I cant stop thinking about him! I dont know what it is but I think I am in love.

Every day
I think of you
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Every hour
I long for you
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Every minute
I miss you
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but, Every second
I breath for you
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And its all because
I love you

Author's Note

OK, so right now this is how I feel and I needed to vent. I know its short and probably doesnt mean or say much, but I dont know. I am sorry if you do not like it. It is the shortest I have ever written, but I needed to write this out. I dont care about grammar and flow either. If you dont like this then dont rate. Opinions and advice are allowed! Thanks!

Reviews

[JenLyn]

This was cute, short and to the point and unlike most love poems because it showcases the positive side of love while most love poems are about heartbreak and longing for someone, this seems happy to me and that you're actually in love rather than lust but that's just my interpretation. Overall a nice write. Keep it up! :)

OK. I like this, it's a pearl with absolutely no flaws :)

[Star Wolf]

Very tender and romantic. It's perfect, like a beautiful jewel.

[Tina Kline]

I really like this. Short is not bad at all and I think you did a fantastic job on this expressing the love that you feel.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I like this... is is simple and pure and that is the how real love is expressed. Makes it more sincere and beautiful.

[AbsentElements]

It may be short but sometimes only a few lines is all you need to sum it up. The ending is perfect, and the name just ties it together. Nice write.

[Luna Northstar]

Very sweet!

[zack]

hey manda its your friend zack its great that u vent your self

[An owl on the moon]

There truly is a living passion and beauty in your words. That pure longing that desires only to be with the one. Wonderful!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

It is short, but says a lot. Very cute, very sweet :) I like the fact that you highlighted some words, they make the point stronger... Nice job, once again!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Its love everyday,
On the hour by the hour,
True love right down to the second.
Nice piece