Everyday

I dont know what it is but I am crazy for him! I cant stop thinking about him! I dont know what it is but I think I am in love.

Every day
I think of you
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Every hour
I long for you
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Every minute
I miss you
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but, Every second
I breath for you
*****
And its all because
I love you

Author's Note

OK, so right now this is how I feel and I needed to vent. I know its short and probably doesnt mean or say much, but I dont know. I am sorry if you do not like it. It is the shortest I have ever written, but I needed to write this out. I dont care about grammar and flow either. If you dont like this then dont rate. Opinions and advice are allowed! Thanks!

Reviews

[JenLyn]

This was cute, short and to the point and unlike most love poems because it showcases the positive side of love while most love poems are about heartbreak and longing for someone, this seems happy to me and that you're actually in love rather than lust but that's just my interpretation. Overall a nice write. Keep it up! :)

[Chloe Christine]

this is super cute. :)
exactly how I feel right noww.
love it. nice. (:

[P.S I Love You]

Sort and sweet right to the point. :]

[DeadToTheWorld]

it's true how love makes us feel for one another i rlly enjoyed it short or not it brings out passion from the heart when we write in my opinion it should come from the heart not the mind for the heart and mind say two different things..over all it is a great write =)

[Theresa]

Short but sweet. I think you capture the feelings of someone who is falling in love and you do it in so few words which can be hard to do. There is emotion, and it is heartfelt. Brought me back to the first time I fell in love. Nicely done and just to add I also like the layout you used.

[Ice QueenJen]

This was beautiful Manda- and just how I feel about the man I love. I can feel him within me, deep in my heart.
Yes it was short-but to the point, I hope he liked it too.

[Alexis]

i like it...
i love it...
omg like omg!
i like the form too :))
god jobb,,,

[Halkhend]

this is really good its pretty

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning poem.

[Alexis]

loooooove itt...
i feel u girl!

[Tate Morgan]

This is your best so far.Do you need any reviews