I Fell For You

I Fell For You

A Poem by Manda
"

It had all started with a walk and then she ran into him! This gorgeous guy is so breath taking! He is a God!

"
Since the first day we met
I couldn't help but fall for you.

I remember walking down
That long narrow street.

I had come to a corner
And there you appeared.

You were shirtless
And wearing ripped navy blue shorts.

You had big brown eyes
And such a beautiful smile.

Your body was leaning against
A tall yellow pole.

You stood there
Showing off your muscular body.

You gave me that crooked smile
I love so very much.

The sun was beating off your face
Making you look even more like a god!

I had to look away
For I couldn't breath!

My heart was beating
A million times a minute.

My thought were everywhere
And I couldn't think straight!

I just stood there
Looking into those big beautiful eyes.

I didn't move
Or even breath.

I tried to speak
But nothing came out.

You left me speechless
And gasping for air!

I knew as I stood there
That this was it.

I had finally found
What I longed for.

I remember that day so well
How could I forget!

It was that very day
That I fell in love with you!

 ~I love you!~

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
I was just sitting around talking to a few people, when I decided to write about this! Its similar to what is happening to me now! It has meaning but I dont know if it makes sense. I dont know about the flow or even the grammar! Please give me your opinions and or advice! Dont rate if not good please! Trying to raise my status! Thanks!

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You're under a spell snap out of it. lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, it's great to feel that way. I haven't had a crush in like a year or so, so I'd love to feel that way again.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


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How nice to have a feeling like that

Posted 14 Years Ago


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