To Be With You

Its so hard. I dont know what to do. He makes me crazy but yet I dont know if Ill ever be able to be with him...

Its so hard
Being without you.

I can't help but miss you
And long for you to return.

You're so cool
And you rule my world!

I love those big brown eyes
And that crooked smile.

Every time I see you
I can't help but gasp for air!

I love you
But I can't be with you.

It hurts to know
That you wont ever be mine

That I wont ever know what it was like
To be in love with you.

To never know what it felt like
To kiss you.

I always imagined us together
And being so in love.

But why?
When I wont ever be able to.

You're all I ever think about
Which makes it so hard for me.

You're everything to me
And I just want us to be together.

I want to be able to love you
Instead of always missing you.

I want to the know the feeling
Of loving you.

I want to know that feeling
Of kissing you.

But most of all I want to know what it feels like
To be with you.

I love you
I always will.

Author's Note

I wrote this for Zack. And yes this comes from the heart. I dont know if it makes sense and I dont even know if the flow and grammar are good but I guess thats up to you to decide. I hope you like it! Dont be afraid to give me advice. Anything that will make this poem better is always good! If there is something wrong with it just comment and not rate. I am trying to raise my status! Thanks!

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

The flow, the heart, the beauty, it all makes this poem incredible. Sweet, kind, I love it. Keep on writing.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It makes sense. It is a good write. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Tate Morgan]

Loves laMENT CANNOT DOMINATE THE ENTIRETY OF A SOUL IF ONE WANTSA TO LIVE ON TO OLD AGE

[Havatara]

I noticed that you didn't put an apostrophe in most of your contractions, and in one place you put your instead of you're. And I don't know, it seemed kind of cheezy, but I'm still waking up so that might have something to do with it. But the flow was good, so I liked that part =)

[SamBug]

This was totally amazing

[zack]

wow thank very good it touches me