To Be With You

Its so hard. I dont know what to do. He makes me crazy but yet I dont know if Ill ever be able to be with him...

Its so hard
Being without you.

I can't help but miss you
And long for you to return.

You're so cool
And you rule my world!

I love those big brown eyes
And that crooked smile.

Every time I see you
I can't help but gasp for air!

I love you
But I can't be with you.

It hurts to know
That you wont ever be mine

That I wont ever know what it was like
To be in love with you.

To never know what it felt like
To kiss you.

I always imagined us together
And being so in love.

But why?
When I wont ever be able to.

You're all I ever think about
Which makes it so hard for me.

You're everything to me
And I just want us to be together.

I want to be able to love you
Instead of always missing you.

I want to the know the feeling
Of loving you.

I want to know that feeling
Of kissing you.

But most of all I want to know what it feels like
To be with you.

I love you
I always will.

Author's Note

I wrote this for Zack. And yes this comes from the heart. I dont know if it makes sense and I dont even know if the flow and grammar are good but I guess thats up to you to decide. I hope you like it! Dont be afraid to give me advice. Anything that will make this poem better is always good! If there is something wrong with it just comment and not rate. I am trying to raise my status! Thanks!

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

The flow, like how you went from one thing to the other, it was great!

[deeps]

This is very well written, such amazing flow as well.
I enjoyed reading this. Emotions are expressed well.

[Soul Magic✯]

wow you did a good job with this one... very well expressed.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Parts of this piece make no sense at all. But when writing on matters of the heart, does anything ever really make sense? I think the looser, chaotic feeling of this piece heightens the subject matter rather than detracting from it. That may have been an accident on your part, or it may not have been - either way it works well.

[Alex Zynder]

poor zach, he doesnt know what he s missing

[kbjami]

I want to know what it feels like too. It made me think of someone special yet I know it would never be. Great job.

[Star Wolf]

The pain of longing. It has to end, hope it does for you. These poems of yours are great, I think.

[QuietPoet]

Aww, very gentle and sweet. I hope one day you'll be able to be together or have this with someone one day.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tender longing expressed through your words. Here is a love that hopes in the face of what seems to be tough odds. Beautiful and honest!

[Tina Kline]

The longing and the desire for that someone you can't have. You did a great job on this.