Missing Him

I miss him so much. Its been so long since I felt or loved the way I loved with him!

I lay there
Missing you...

I miss seeing your big brown eyes
And that pretty smile

I miss the feeling
When you kissed me

I miss the warmth
Of your hugs

But mostly
I just miss you

I cant help but think of you
Each and everyday of my life

You're everything to me
And its hard living without you

You're locked inside of me
My heart wont let go

All our memories
Are trapped inside my head

They haunt me
Each and every night

Oh how I miss you
And long for you

I've been waiting
For months

I know my time will come
And we'll meet again

And everything I ever missed
Will soon be with me again.

I miss you
And I'll always love you

Author's Note

I dont know about this. I felt like venting some more. But I feel like it doesnt make sense. Tell me what you think! Thanks

Reviews

This makes sense. Matters f he heart often do.

[Luna Northstar]

I agree with Rachielle, it does make perfect sense. Sweet, sad, and heart breaking. You did a wonderful job.

[rachielle]

It does make sense. The feeling of having been left is such a painful and disappointing experience, and this poem tells us just that.

"All our memories
Are trapped inside my head
They haunt me
Each and every night"

There's nothing more painful than reminiscing the memories you long for on cold summer nights.

[zack]

wow wow i like idk who the lucky guy is

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a beautiful longing here... the desire for what once was.. the hopeful heart of what will be again one day. Wondrous, vivid write!

[MissWordSmith]

so touching and simple...there was beauty in your simplicity~! really loved it... could see you thinking about him, missing him, and waiting... Well done!

[Havatara]

Awww.... I don't know if it's just the poem or because I've been talking to my friend about his marrying the girl he loves for the past hour, but I think this is the best of your poems that I read. Keep up the good work!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It makes sense and it is very good. Don't worry about it venting it good thing. It makes poems more enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. :D

[kbjami]

I liked it, but . . . please change the "your" to "you're"
I kept noticing it. Sorry . . . I don't mean to be the grammar police or anything
Well anyways . . .
I did like it a lot though. I liked the style of how you wrote it.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Manda
Poetry is from the heart and this piece is most definitely from the heart. It’s a love letter earnestly expressing those feeling.
Mauricio