Game Of Love

She looks at him unable to look away. Hes so sexy! She plays with him and watches him with her wide open! He falls for her tricks.

Hey sexy
You want to play?

I cant help but notice
You looking right at me.

Your big brown eyes
Meeting mine for the first time.

Oh God!
You are so sexy!

You're given me that perfect smile
Showing those gorgeous white teeth.

I cant help but stare
And gasp for air!

You stand proudly
Showing off your muscular body.

Oh how I wish
You were mine!

You look like a god
From up above.

I looked away
But it was hard to stay away.

I felt your eyes
Beating on the back of my head.

I turned around
And met your gaze once again

We stood there
Watching each other....

And then it happened!
He moved in
And kissed me.

The kiss was sweet
And such a treat!

My hands
Wrapped around his precious neck.

I couldnt believe
That this was happening.

I had fallen for his little game
Called love.

...And now
He was all mine!

Author's Note

OK I just wrote this, but I dont know if it even makes any sense. If it needs work please tell me and give me advice. Thank You

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

This is a very nice write about temptation and giving into that temptation and and winning the prize!

[kbjami]

I liked it.
I really do love your 2 line stanza style in your poems.
I think it makes sense. Sure it could use a little work, but I never feel any poem is ever finished being edited or what ever. Great job.

[Tina Kline]

This makes perfect sense. A fun, romantic playful poem.

[MusicJunkie66]

I loved it too!! =)

[kayla garcia]

i love it

OK, I love this.

[Luna Northstar]

great work, I love it!

[zack]

nice work very good this is one of your good poems

[Mauricio Montoya]

Rhythm and rhyme a sly notion with poetic motion put into action.
Love at first sight, beautify written.
Mauricio

[An owl on the moon]

It gives a beautiful sense of that awakening, when love is just beginning and that heart races.. so much excitement at finding the one. You brought alive that wonder!