I dont care about flow or grammar. I just needed to write. I am really hurting right now... I know its not one of my best pieces, and I know it probably doesnt make sense but I didnt know what else to do... If you dont think this is good and your rating is lower than 90% dont rate cause I am trying to raise my status. ....Thanks I guess
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This gave me chills because of how much I can relate to it. Isn't it just so nice how guys just use you for a while and then get bored with you and act like you never exsisted?
Nicely done. I liked this piece a lot.
There are a few typos, reading over once or twice could fix that, but it was perfect regardless. Everyone hurts from time to time, and I'm sure everyone of those people can relate to your writing perfectly. Good write.
It is good regardless of flow or grammar. It came out beautiful. It reminds me a lot of my poetry. My favorite poem is Sad and Alone, but this one is awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Powerfully gripping and filled with rich, dark colors of emotion, the pain is so heartfelt and raw. What a terrible thing to lose the one you love, and no pain is deeper than that caused by a friend. Amazing vivid write.
I can feel pain of despaired, depression, and sadness Mayor D's to me!
The kind that can end a life that needs love to survived as water.
It makes perfect sense to me..in fact..a lot of sense. Every word you choose is in agony and it bleeds. And in this life we have to take the points up or down..that's life
Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in.. more..