Hurting Inside

Its all his fault! Hes hurt me inside! Now I am crying... Why did he have to go and do this to me...?

Why are you acting like this?
You are making me cry.

The words you say
Just break my heart.

I love you,
Yet you refuse to believe it.

Do you think I would lie to you?
I would rather die for you
Than do something like that.

I don't understand why you are so mad
Or why you are yelling at me?

I thought you loved me?
I thought you believed in me,
Knowing I would never lie.

But everything you had said to me,
Well was it all just a lie?

Did you plan this?
Were you hoping to get to me?

Well what ever you did,
It worked.

I don't know why you are acting like this,
But its hurting me inside,
And making me cry.

I never felt so broken,
And so hurt.

Every tear that falls,
Falls because of you.

I hate you,
But yet I can't help but miss you.

You were everything to me,
And you were the only one,
...I ever loved.

Author's Note

I dont care about flow, grammar or any typos for that matter. This is happening to me right now. And I am really hurting inside. I just needed to write something...

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

I understand the need to write something... I have something I'm working on right now :D Just a bunch of words thrown together atm, but it's getting better haha.
I loved this piece! I felt your hurt. Constant rhetorical questions really get a point across, in any kind of writing. This is one reason why I dont want to date in HS. All of the guys are immature and have no clue how to handle a relationship maturely and tenderly. Aghghghrlglrlglroglroglghghghgh MEN! (that was a frustrated growl, I think... haha!) Only the good men understand your feelings. Find that man. CLING TO HIM and dont let him go :D
I loved this, and i'm sorry you're going through something like this. I'm here, open ears, if you need any help! [or someone just to rant to :)]

[Chloe Christine]

I love writing to vent.
You are very good at it.
Everyone of my friends who writes does this,
and your better than all of them.
Very nice.

[Jess.]

"I hate you,
But yet I cant help but miss you.

You were everything to me,
And you were the only one,"

I really love that part, because that's exactly how I feel about this one guy, though I left the love part out because I wasn't in love with him, I don't think.
Very nice piece!

[LynLee]

so sad.......good rhymes!

[Cassandra D.]

this was emotional.
nice.

[zack]

for someone that does not care about flow grammar u did a great job

[dearly beloved]

Your word choice really conveyed your emotions. Good job. :3

[kayla garcia]

i love it i can rlate to it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a nice poem. It is full of emotion. It is excellent. Thanks for sharing with me. :)

[Scarlet Pulse]

I'm sorry you had to go through this. You know what though Manda, you're a strong young woman. You write to have your feelings heard and to express and let go. With everything you've been through, you'll be strong and get through it. Good write though.

[deeps]

Wow! This is quite the emotional filled write here. I enjoyed this