She Is Everything

She is everything I have ever wanted and so much more. I hate when we dont talk because it makes me miss you.

I dont know what it is
But every time I talk to her
All I feel is...
Love

I feel like I have my whole future planned out
I can just picture as together
...Forever

When we say goodbye for the night
I begin to miss her
And wonder when we will speak again

I try to distract myself
But no matter how hard I try
She is always on my mind

By the end of the day
It feels like my hearts been torn apart

And just when I begin to lose hope
There she appears
And I feel a sense of relief that we are talking again

Everything I had once felt vanishes into thin air
I feel happy and alive
And that piece of me that was missing
Were replaced by her

I dont know what it is
But all I know is that I love her
And maybe someday soon
....

We'll end up together
Forever

Author's Note

I wrote this from my Mr. Guy! He told me how he felt about me and everything happening to us. I wrote this to help him out cause he wanted to write me a poem, but didnt know how so I helped him out. What do you think!?

Reviews

[Chloe Christine]

awwh, I completely love this. it's like, a favorite of mine.
-Adds to library-
This is awesome, I get the feeling. I love it. very nice.
90/100 (:

[Scarlet Pulse]

I really like how this poem is in a different perspective, an unknown person. It's a great change. I really liked this poem.

[A.Lee]

This is really good! I'm surprised that you were able to write it so fluently from a male perspective. You did an excellent job.

[LynLee]

i loved this piece......it sounds as if your "him"............. i like that

[Cassandra D.]

the ending was beautiful.

[Wolfe Greytome]

I REALLY like this piece. The fact that you chose to write this piece from the male perspective shows the true extent of your talent. If I didn't know who the writer was, I would believe a man had written this piece. Well done!!!!!!!!!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awww this was cute. Thanks for sharing.

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here, full of emotions.

[Tristan Noir]

i should dedicate this to my n***a girlfriend lol

[Holly-Marie]

Lovely =) Full of emotion and very well written. It flowed really well too. Great work