Invisible To The Naked Eye

Her friend gave her a picture of him. He was so beautiful and she loved him. He was everything she wanted... But she could never have him.

As I lie in bed
I look at the picture of you...
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You're beautiful
So damn beautiful
        ~*~
You have light brown hair
And big brown eyes
        ~*~
You have a smile of an angel
And when ever I see it my heart melts
        ~*~
You're so damn tall
And your body is so muscular
        ~*~
God your SEXY
And I cant help but think...
        ~*~
God why couldnt you give him to me
Why must I be invisible to the naked eye
I love him
And I know just maybe he could learn to love me too
        ~*~
I set the picture back on the table
And closed my eyes
        ~*~
I began to dream
I began to feel the love inside me
        ~*~
How I dreaded these feelings
All they ever did was make me want to cry
And torture me inside...
                ~*~
We were laying together on the sand
He was playing with my light blonde hair
And singing a little lullaby
We watched the sun set across the lake
It was beautiful
The sun's radiant colors painting the sky
....
        ~*~
I continued dreaming
Even though it killed me inside
        ~*~
I loved him
I really did
But he would never love me
        ~*~
I would never be his angel
Or his girlfriend
        ~*~
Just another girl
Invisible to the naked eye...

Author's Note

I dont care about flow or grammar. I just wrote this because I was bored. I am trying to raise my rating so if you dont like it or needs work and you would rate it poorly dont bother to rate. Criticism would be nice along with positive feedback! Thanks!

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Very nicely done. We all have our fantasies and you did an excellent job writing about it. I like it.

[Cassandra D.]

Loved it.

[Jane Doe]

:)))))))))) LOVEEEEEEEE IT GURLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZ HAHHAH JK

[bubbles]

like this allot

Wow. I like it. I like it a lot. Reminds me of a blind date i was supposed to go on but then both the guys fell in love with the girl i was going to go on with...all in all, I love it.