Mr. Mystery Guy

I dont know him that well, but I feel like I have known him forever. He makes me so happy inside. I dont know what is. He is just a mystery to me

I dont know how this happened
It all started with one simply question
And now look where we are
            ~*~
We sit on the computer
Chatting away
Talking about anything and everything
            ~*~
The more I talk to him
The more interesting he gets
He is totally cool
            ~*~
I look at the picture he sent me
Hard to believe this is Mr. Unknown
I have been talking to
            ~*~
Hes tall and skinny
And has dark brown eyes
His brown hair very short
And his smile is simply amazing
            ~*~
I dont know what it is about this mystery guy
But he just makes me feel happy inside
Its like hes filled something that has been missing from me all this time
            ~*~
Whoever this guy is
He has something
Something I cant figure out
            ~*~
I guess thats why he is such a mystery
I have so much to learn and discover
What an adventure it should be

Author's Note

I dont care about flow or grammar. I just had to write about this event that is going on with me. I do hope you like it everyone! Heh :0)

Reviews

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"I guess that's why he is such a mystery, I have so much to learn and discover, What an adventure it should be." Is such an amazing ending I think.
Nice job!

[Chloe Christine]

i really liked this one!
sorry if this is late,
i have 105 requests a the moment.
anyways,
very well written!
90/100

[Scarlet Pulse]

The poem itself is very mysterious. I like how you made it that way. You didnt tell us what is mysterious about him, so it makes your readers wonder, which is great. Good job.

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like this piece. A bit of mystery and intrigue with a a delightful choice of wording.

[Havatara]

The flow needed a bit of work, and the last line in the sixth stanza was a bit too long for me, but sometimes the words just won't . . . condense, I guess. Other than that, I loved the poem and I so agree. Mystery Guys are amazing to talk to. =)

[PaperHearts]

Interesting write! I liked how you fed the reader small snippets of information at a time; it was kind of as if we were going on the whole mysterious journey with you! I hope this guy ends up being the amazing guy you think he is! I guess only time will tell. :)
~PaperHearts

[AbsentElements]

Yet another totally understandable experience. It was very well written and a very interesting topic chosen to write about. Very nice.

[Tate Morgan]

Excellent

[Holly-Marie]

I really liked this, straightforward but art in it's own right. The heart felt poems are always the best =)

[zack]

good job on letting your fellings go