Hurting...

I cant believe he would do this to me... How dare he make me cry and spread a lie. Its not even true!

How dare you
How dare you do this to me
Your little rumor that you started
About me sexting
Its not true
I dont even care that its not true
What I really care about
Is how badly it hurt me
I thought you could handle our breakup
But I guess I thought wrong
I still cant believe you did this to me
I havent cried this hard in so long
I hate you now
I hate you with every bit of my heart
I wont forgive you
Not today
Not tomorrow
Not ever

Author's Note

I am hurting. How dare he! It brings tears to my eyes... I hate him now. I dont care about flow or grammar. I just need to write this out seeming this is the only thing to vent to

Reviews

[Scarlet Pulse]

the poem is very captivating. You dont really tell us straight forward what he did or what it was about. I really like how you leave it up to the reader's imagination. Great.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Amazing how easily one can use words to vent - and you don't wake up with sore hands the next morning either. =P Very well written, highly emotional piece.

[AbsentElements]

I know exactlly how you feel, though the man I hate I never dated. He sat there and told me that my last boyfriend only wanted sex...Well look who was talking.

Anyway this poem is very...Interesting. I know that's a word I use alot when it comes to your poems but it is the only word that can fully describe it in the way I am trying to. This is a very nice write.

[Alex W]

Very nice little vent of anger there lol.

Perhaps you should just punch him though, that works for me lol ;-)

[Kon™]

Great way to vent, just write it out ;) A very relatable emotion that you showed here, and nice piece :]

[Tate Morgan]

Excellent

[BriAnna Wyble]

love it :)

[nostal]

The emphasis on the constant usage of the word 'hate' adds a deeper, angrier and serious tone.
Nice.

[Chloe Christine]

You vent alot, and have great poems come out of it.
Great job!

[Cassandra D.]

Rumors, rumors... what to do?
This poem showed deeply expressed feelings... nice work