Its Been So Long

Its been so long since I've found happiness. I missed it so much. For so long I was lost... Unable to find my way home.... Will I ever find my way?

Its been so long
Since I've seen the sun
My world has been in the dark
I've been unable to see the world
And its radiant colors
I've faced many challenges
And have grown tired of trying to win
I have grown depressed
I see ghost
And walk at the edges of the world
I've been lost for so very long...
But I've finally found the sun
And the light around me
I live in such a joyful world
Where the flowers stand beautifully
Birds are singing heavenly
And I walk the path of life
Its been so long since I've felt so alive

Author's Note

I dont care about flow or grammar I just felt like writing something. This is random but I dont know! Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Scarlet Pulse]

This is one of your better writes. I loved it. Great, descriptive details. I love the transition between dark and cold to light and warm. Great write.

[AbsentElements]

I can see this poem was written with different thoughts on your mind. I very much enjoyed this, it flows well (and I know you don't care about flow, but still). All in all it is a very nice poem/

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I can certainly relate to this... I like you raw edginess in your work... it is pure emotion, no sugar coating... very strong work.

[Taylor H.]

I liked it.

[Simpleasures]

That's what writing is, expressing your emotions...you control your emotions and how you view the world. When you wake up everyday, find the beauty in something, even the smallest thing and your whole outlook on life will change. You are alive and well, that's a start. Great job. Keep sharing.

[Soul Magic✯]

very well expressed. life can be like rain sometimes, but dont give up. the sun will definitely come your way *hugs*

[Emily B]

there is always light, even when we can't see it

beautiful words

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like it. Not your best piece, but for a spur of the moment writing, it is very well done.

[Cassandra D.]

This was a very deep poem.
I'll have to agree with Cassy, it is heartbreaking.

"But I've finally found the sun
And the light around me
I live in such a joyful world
Where the flowers stand beautifully
Birds are singing heavenly
And I walk the path of life
Its been so long since I've felt so alive"

I love that part :-)

[just rose.]

you have some very deep emotions expressed here. i especially like the hope and lightness that you convey at the end.