I Want You, I Miss You, I Need You

I lay in bed, sick and lifeless. I havent been able to sleep let alone eat. I cant stop wishing you were here with me right now... Oh how I long for you! Please come to me and heal this illness!

As I lay in bed
...sick

I start to think of you
...I miss you

How I wish you were here
Not so you can see me in pain
But for you to keep me company

All I want is for you to lay next to me
And hold my frigid hands in yours

For you to look into my eyes
And tell me that everything will be ok

I want you to promise me you wont leave me
That you will stay here until I'm well again

But most of all...
I want you

Oh I miss you
So very much

How I long for you
To be here with me

I lay in my bed
...so very sick

Unable to stop missing you
Or even thinking of you

My body is so tired
So weak from fighting this cold

I close my eyes
And take one deep breath

I slowly fade off into a deep sleep
And I begin to dream of
....YOU

Author's Note

I dont care about flow, or even grammar. All I want him him! I need him! I miss him! I feel so crappy...and so very sick! Save me...

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

it's very descriptive and I can imagine everything well. great job :]

This is amazing, and at the same time sort of heart-wrenching. You paint a picture of sadness, one that all of us either have felt, or will feel.

[Holly-Marie]

I thought this was beautiful. Sad, but not without a feeling of hope. Beautiful and calming but intense at the same time.

[*Kantola*]

I absolutely loved this. You'll pull through! My friend is going through something similar. It pains me to see her so troubled, so it's beginning to pain me seeing someone else just like she is: Immobilized by this yearning for someone you can't be with (because they're asshats, lol).
I loved this, it had a neat little pattern! Lovely flow, too!
All I can say is, you'll find someone eventually to fill that hole that (whatever his name is) has created. There are multiple matches for everyone, many fish in the sea, blah blah blah.
Great job, Manda!!!

[Soul Magic✯]

beautiful ink. love can definitely make anyone feel this way. this is very heartfelt and sweet. nicely done

[Alicante lullaby]

c'mon manda..get well and every lady's quote''forget''honey...