I Miss You, I Cry For You, I Love You

I Miss You, I Cry For You, I Love You

A Poem by Manda
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I love him so much! I cant let him go. Without him I am a lifeless soul longing for his love and company....

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I miss you
I cry for you
And I love you
You are all that I want
And all that I need
Nothing would make me happier
But to be back in your arms
Its been so long since I've touched you
I miss your kisses so much
I can still feel the taste of your lips
So sweet...
I cant sleep at night
Because your taking over my thoughts
You mean to much to me
Its impossible to let you go
When I thought you were gone forever
It nearly killed me inside
I was an empty soul
Longing for you to come back
I am glad you're still here
And glad you never really left
Cause once again it caused me pain
And brought so many tears to my eyes
I miss you
I cry for you
But most of all
I love you

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
I dont care about flow...not even grammar. I can only express how I feel.

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Excellent

Posted 14 Years Ago


As always I find myself being carried along by a tidal wave of pure emotion in this piece. I think this piece does a good job of giving a glimpse into the tumultuous swirl of emotion that an epic romance can leave in its wake.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This piece has a lot of different emotions. The way you expressed them was great.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Emotion filled piece. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


There's no words to describe this. One of the best I've ever read on this site. Excellent =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


Another feeling many people have experienced, but until recently I hadn't. Knowing what I do now I understand how you feel. This is definetly a great way to express how you feel, and you did it very well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a lovely poem! Self-expression through poetry is a nice coping method. It allows you to get everything down, and even in your own little code if wordered right. I do the same with drawing, really. Bravo ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poems about a persons true feelings are the best to me!
You express your emotions well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well written, with some really expressive, heartfelt lines. In a way, I kind of wanted you to expand on your emotions a bit more, as I felt that your poem only brushed the surface. However, I liked the simplicity of this, and thought that it was well paced, in the way that it led up to the final line of 'I love you'. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


Expressing the way you feel about a person is truly a powerful thing.
This poem was very nice.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2010
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