Looking Back

I look back and all I can do is think of you, and when we were happily together. I miss you so much a wish everyone knew how much I kneed you.

I look back at we had
And what we loved most
….Each other

We never needed anybody else
We were always so happy together

Oh how I miss you
And the way you used to kiss me

Its been so long since I’ve been in your arms
So long since your lips met mine

My lips long for yours
They wish to meet once more

I hate waiting for you
It causes me too much pain

I cant love anybody like I loved you
You’re just too special to me

I look back and think
Why did we have to say goodbye

Why did I have to go back home
I would have rather stayed with you

I loved you
And I still love you

How could I stop loving you
When you’re all I ever dream about

I look back
And I tell myself I couldn’t be any luckier
To have a guy as wonderful as you

Author's Note

I dont care about flow or grammar, once again this comes from the heart.

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

You did a great job at describing the emotion. Don't worry, you'll pull through this =)

[Wolfe Greytome]

A nice piece. A bit of melancholy mixed with euphoria.....blended together in a great sentimental piece. Terrific Job!!!!!

[Scarlet Pulse]

This poem makes me think "awww". I know what it is like to have a wonderful guy, and to long for him and miss him. Hang in there. I hope it works out for you guys.

[Impulse]

Heartbreaking. Truly heartbreaking but things will work out. If the person you love walks away, they weren't right for you in the first place. Deep stuff you have here. Amazing =]

[Emily]

I can relate here. It seems that more people can than you would expect. Nice work, and I am sorry you've had to feel that way.

Might want to make a little correction to the last line, it currently reads "To have a guy as wonder as you" I'm sure you meant "wonderful"

:-)

[Jess.]

Well I can't relate cause I haven't really been in love yet...but this was nice, the flow is good as well.

[PaperHearts]

Aww, this was really sad to read! The feeling that you described in your poem was one that I could certainly relate to, as it was a situation that I'd experienced before. You captured the longing and passion really well, and I liked the insightful, reflective tone of your poem. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Cassandra D.]

The ending was so nice!
loved it.

[AbsentElements]

It may not have perfect flow but the story it tells is powerful. Very nice job explaining the way you feel

This is beauty. I love how you flow so freely, and it's obvious how much you miss him.