She's A Fighter

My sister is such a fighter. She is handicap and cant walk. Her life is a whole challenge... Nobody understands what she goes through.

My twin sister is a fighter
Her life is full of challenges
Nobody understands her
Nobody knows what she feels inside
She cant walk
Her muscles are too weak
Surgery never seems to help her
She sits in her wheelchair everyday
Feeling almost hopeless
What else can she do
Kids are always making fun of her
I try so hard to shut them up
But they just dont listen to me
They dont care
They just dont care
And it hurts me
Knowing that I'll never be able to see her like me
She wont ever be able to walk
Never be able to hang out with her friends by herself
Not ever being able to go the bathroom without someone being there to help her
Its hard to watch her struggle through life
God never giving her a break
She is always telling me that she wants to have her own family one day
I simply tell her that she will one day
But I know it wont...
My twin sister is a dreamer
She dreams of walking someday
And being just like everybody else
I know my sister better than anyone else
And not just because I am her twin
But because I listen to her
And I know my sister is so strong
And she fights what she wants

Author's Note

I dont care about grammar...or flow. I just wanted to write something about my sister. She is so strong. She has had more operations on her body...and other one soon. I just needed to write about her to show I care and were about my twin sister

Reviews

[Impulse]

You're also one of the strong ones. Staying by your sister's side as she goes through this ordeal has gotta be taking it's toll on the both of you. Compassion, love, and comfort fill this piece. Beautiful =]

[bubbles]

good 4 ur sis. i could nt even begin to imagin that situation. good luck to her

[PaperHearts]

Aww, a very sweet poem! This was such a heartfelt, expressive poem, and I could really tell that you love your sister a lot. It sounds like your sister has a lot of strength to her, and I found it inspiring to read about her and how she deals with her day-to-day life. :)
I wish your sister the best of luck! This was a beautiful write,
~PaperHearts

[Dana Kathryn]

Hello,I love this,it is very real and unconditional!!! A rare thing to find today,Great job,I am sure she is very pleased with your sweet words of her :)


Dana-

[Sarah]

wow i like this it really touch my heart aww

[Scarlet Pulse]

Aw!!! Manda such a sweet, emotional, strong poem.You seem just as strong as your sister, for being by her side and helping her. Your twin sounds very strong, and capable.

[Jess.]

Such a lovely poem here, you sound like a very loving sister, and your sister sounds so brave and amazing!

[Taylor H.]

This was a great poem. and your sister sounds like a strong and amazing person :)

[deeps]

Such a beautiful but yet an emotional write.

[Alicante lullaby]

and you love her so much,,,tell her she would be okay,,,your love shall heal her,,,