Fading Away

Times running out. He doesnt notice her and she is fading each and everyday. Soon she will be gone forever.

I watch them
Each and everyday
In the corner of my eye
Hoping they'll see me
But they never seem to notice
My time is running out
And I am slowly
Fading away...

Reviews

[Scarlet Pulse]

Great, powerful poem. It was a good read. A suggestion, you can use some line breaks at the end to make the reader read it slow to suggest the "Slowly fading away."

[Sseoni]

Great poem! It was short, but a wonderful read! It was quite sad, but beautiful as well! :D

[Alicante lullaby]

VERY SHORT AND sad,,,sorrow and moaning,,,pretty little piece of art,,,

[ebur™]

One of your shorter poems, but I felt that it said alot. It's very relatable and you worded this piece well. It was heart felt and saddening as well, a mixture of emotions. Great job :)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

this is soo sad.
everyone has their person who just doesn't notice . . .
this was short and beautiful.