Fading Away

Times running out. He doesnt notice her and she is fading each and everyday. Soon she will be gone forever.

I watch them
Each and everyday
In the corner of my eye
Hoping they'll see me
But they never seem to notice
My time is running out
And I am slowly
Fading away...

Reviews

[.nicole.]

Wonderfully done. I have known the feling of this poem a many times.

[Taylor H.]

:(. great poem, full of emotion. Great job

[Wolfe Greytome]

short....stark....clean.....wonderfully done!!!!

[deeps]

This is wonderful, i like this alot.

[Krazy On The Outside]

I really really like this one!
I love the way you trailed it off.

We always dream of being noticed by the right person.

[black.butterfly]

simple but meaningful

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Cute :)

[Sarah]

Beautiful

[PaperHearts]

Less is more, and this can definitely be said for this poem! I liked it's simplicity and the fact that you were able to say so much, in so few words. This poem can be interpreted in so many ways, and I think that's one of the things that I liked about it. The fact that you gave the reader this thought, and then left so much more room for them to find out how it related to them, and what it meant. You ended the poem perfectly. :)
~PaperHearts